Friday, December 2, 2011

Before & After




For my in-studio landscape painting class, I usually spend about 45 minutes to an hour doing a demo on a different subject each week. Obviously, that's not a lot of time and I don't expect to do fully resolved paintings on the spot. I'm usually talking about some specific aspect or another, and I'll paint and talk until I make my point. 

If I think my unresolved painting has potential, I'll work on it later in my studio and bring to to a satisfactory finish. This may take an additional hour or five, for a 9 x 12 painting (my usual demo size). 

When I did this particular demo (above), my topic was simplifying complex things like cars, using atmosphere. I didn't spend too much time on composition or drawing, as you can plainly see. But I thought there was potential and I didn't want to let it go so I started reworking it later, when I was alone in my studio and away from any pressure to perform. 

This is what I ended up with. It's changed quite a bit. I love the medium's capacity and tolerance for making big changes!



The placement of the figure is unconventional, and I kept moving it around but couldn't resist playing with fire. In the original demo, it's placed more predictably, and while it's sloppily safe, it was boring to me. I kept edging it to the left a little at a time (as if she was walking) and in the end, I decided to stick it right near the edge, but by manipulating the edges and directions of the strokes, I hoped it would work; or at least look intentional.

Anyway, a fun demo and a rewarding reworking experience.

4 comments:

Cindy said...

What could possibly be more exciting than breaking the rules!

Terry said...

Getting away with it!

graziano tessarolo said...

Beautiful, you do not only teach in your studio, you teach also in your blog. I am learning a lot. THANKS

Terry said...

Thanks so much for letting me know that, graziano! Much appreciated :-D